Bar graph
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6). Page 1: We question the use of the bar graph overall for this secondary outcome. Additional points as per the below: a). Statistics as they are incorrect and misleading. Data should be reflective of the Product Monograph. b). The copy "superior" is unsubstantiated by the study design. c). Please identify as a secondary endpoint. d). Remove the arrow alongside the graph as it is not proportionate to magnitude of effect. e). Please add n-values for all treatment arms and remove the placement alongside the graph to a more suitable position. Please add the HR. f). Please re-position the copy "Median in months..." further below as a disclaimer. g). Add units to the y-axis. h). Please revise x-axis label (s.4.1, s.4.2)
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Need to specify primary and secondary endpoint; need to specify all qualifiers and supporting info (including overall event rates)